Assignment 1 - Drafts II

I have improved on my sketches up a notch (i hope)!

The earphones forming the letters of my name from 'I love music';

and here is the photoshopped draft:

Comments were that the white background was too bland and only the words 'music' was colourful. Will edit it.

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This is hardly recognisable but its roots were actually from the vague patchwork fill of the letters of my name. I decided the patches were too simplistic so i decided to depict poverty using each of the letters of my name. So here it is, 'I hate poverty';

W - coins falling from the sky and outreached hands
E - plasters (embodying help and first aid)
N - mouldy bread (too poor for proper food)
D - an old pair of patched up boot with shoelaces
Y - a pair of inverted jeans, also old and patched up, to be of more hyperbolic extent with the aid of Photoshop


and here is the photoshopped draft:

My tutorial mates thought this was 'fashionable' (?) and was not effective in expressing the essence of poverty. I hate it too! Going to change it to something else. Poverty is too vague and tough to work with.